Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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. While some

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hold a strong view that it is a natural skill, the opposites make a statement that a person can become a

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of view and my personal opinion about

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phenomenon Evidently, a wealth of

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are naturally born leaders since they own the strong characteristics to become a

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person, gregarious and full of energy. All these personality traits help the

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to manage,

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gather

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inspire and motivate them. Vladimir Putin,

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president of Russia can be cited as an outstanding example that he

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who inspires many

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with his boundless professional abilities,

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, being sociable,

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and having strong traits are important natural

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for being a chief.

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can be built and enhanced. There are a bunch of elements that make someone a great

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as discipline and resourcefulness, which can definitely be developed through one's upbringing and life period.

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, to become a pioneer as well as a president of Vietnam, Hochiminh had to

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knowledge from developed nations in

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time to find an ideal way to lead our country.

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a natural skill,

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can be developed by

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experience in life. In conclusion,

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a strong

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's talents and traits are both genetic and can be improved by training, observation, and a lot of hard work, there are many

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born without natural

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who can still become good leaders thank

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

311 words

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