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Tourism is always a force of good which enables people of different countries to understand each other. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that
tourism
 is considered to be one of the most common ways to enable people to discover new cultures and civilizations, meet new people
of
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 different
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countries
countires
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countries
 and
having
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 a great experience. I do believe that we should
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encourage
encouarge
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encourage
tourism
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the tourism
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 industry and support global efforts
in
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this
 issue. Some people argue that
tourism
 should not take
this
 priority, they deny the obvious benefits by saying that only certain classes who have
this
 fortune to travel and visit new places,
However
,they count the economic reasons in their judgment,
it
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 is not hard to have
this
 experience just for one time at least. some
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countries
countires
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countries
 have a variety of programmes
such
 as cheap journies abroad,
for
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 religious
tourism
 like
visit
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 holy places is supported by many organizations all over the world.
Therefore
their
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 is no doubt the individual's financial situation could not prevent
public
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the public
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 from having
this
expirment
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experiment
.
On the other hand
, lots of benefits can be seen,
for instance
, discovering other's natures and habits, the lifestyle of new generations all over the globe, how the ancient built their civilizations, how they survived and
successed
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succeeded
 to
leave
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 their
hertiage
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heritage
 to us.
Furthermore
,
the
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tourism
 has become a significant economic resource for many nations,
thus
 we should support any efforts
could
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that could
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 lead to
increase
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an increase
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the
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 number of tourists. In conclusion, if there wasn't
a
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tourism
, many beautiful things couldn't have been discovered.
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