beingselfish is considered a reason for job success? Give your opinion. Reasons with examples
It's considered by some people, that selfishness is the leader to success. In my opinion, I disagree completely with
this
, gaining experiences
Fix the agreement mistake
experience
came
from generosity Wrong verb form
comes
as well as
job development.
Firstly
, gaining some experiences come
from transferring information from one to another. If every person thinks to keep his knowledge around his circle, Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
then
work will be harder. For example
, if old generations decided to keep what they have learnt to themself like making food or producing goods, it will be hard to start every time all over again. So, it is important not to be selfish and share what we have learned by transferring it to others as well as
gaining knowledge from them or others.
On the other hand
, job development depends on sharing information. in any company or institute section, there are different departments with different specializations, such
as IT, Survey, Civil, Human resources... etc. any part of them depend
on the information from the other Correct subject-verb agreement
depends
department
to continue the performance effectively. To illustrate, if there is a building construction project and the survey section refuses to give the architecture the survey data, Fix the agreement mistake
departments
then
the work will be obstructed. Although
any section has specialised tasks, the progress and development of their effort should be shared with others to demand the job continue.
To conclude
, opposite to
what Change preposition
apply
it
thought , being selfish will not lead to success at all in Correct pronoun usage
I
both
individual or collective work. Correct word choice
either
However
, it's important to share knowledge and experience to demand growth and progress.Submitted by Fatima Sami on
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