Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that unpaid community
service
should be compulsorily incorporated Use synonyms
in
secondary education programs.In my opinion, Change preposition
into
this
is an unwise proposal, which carries a lot of serious consequences Linking Words
on
Change preposition
for
the
society and Correct article usage
apply
citizens
. Correct pronoun usage
its citizens
Therefore
, I do not agree with Linking Words
this
view.
Community services play a major role in integrating different layers of Linking Words
the
society. It helps in the development of daily activities and because of Correct article usage
apply
this
Linking Words
reason
it should be carried out by qualified persons. Forcing students to be involved in these activities without their permission and willingness will result in a drop in the quality of these activities. Add a comma
,reason
For instance
, if we forced a talented young musician to provide a Linking Words
service
in a rehabilitation house for seniors, Use synonyms
this
will affect his musical skills enormously.
Actually, Linking Words
this
proposal reminds me of Linking Words
the
forced labour during the forties of the Correct article usage
apply
last
century, when Germans used individuals from occupied territories to work in their factories. It is inhuman to dictate what people can or cannot do. As we know, students in high schools have a lot of financial burdens. Linking Words
For example
, they have to pay their tuition fee. These factors will make it hard for them and their parents to accept the suggested plan.
In conclusion, community Linking Words
service
should be a voluntary duty left Use synonyms
for
qualified persons, who intend to do it. Poor students should be paid to offer Change preposition
to
such
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Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a service
service
so that they can overcome their financial difficulties.Fix the agreement mistake
services
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite