Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: • Say why you would like to go on the trip • Suggest what you could do to help during the trip • Ask questions about the trip

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Dear Teacher, I am excited to write

this

letter to express my interest in the trip to Canada along with my kid. I have a strong desire to visit the best place in Vancouver in Canada as we are going to see some historical and mesmerizing constructions.

On the other hand

, we have breathtaking scenery throughout the city. As you know, I have profound experience in the tours and travel industry and I can take

this

as an opportunity to explore and explain a few new things to our kids.

In addition

, I will take care of their health and safety despite our busy schedule.

Last

but not least, I can help them to translate French as I am good at speaking.

However

, I would like to know a few details regarding the trip

such

as how much we need to pay ? who will look after the food preparations in Canada? Who will be the contact person during the emergency? I would really appreciate it if you would share any other details which I am missing here. I look forward to hearing a response with the required information before we reach the airport. Yours Faithfully, Lakshmi.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Enthusiastic
Chaperone
Itinerary
Accommodations
Logistics
Overseeing
Cultural exchange
Assist
Supervise
Engage
Responsibilities
Bilingual
First aid certified
Emergency protocols
Team-building activities
Communication skills
Safety measures
Childcare experience
Transport arrangements
Educational objectives

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