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You are organizing a conference for your company. Write a letter to a colleague asking him/her to give a presentation during the conference. -Describe what this conference is about -Why you want him/her to give a presentation -Give details about the conference

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Dear Ravi, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about an upcoming conference on the company's growth strategies.
Hence
, we are looking for an employee who can present a case study with a few real-time examples despite our daily activities. As you heard,
this
 would be an opportunity to demonstrate our phenomenal talent in front of all corporate team members. Having said that, you would be the right person to fulfil
this
 post and take responsibility all the way.
In addition
, your's presentation skills along with time management strategies are really awesome which cannot find in the market. Since
this
 is all about growth and sales-related presentation, we need to collect and focus more on recent changes.
However
, we are organising
this
 event in the heart of the city at 8pm followed by dinner.
Furthermore
, we
also
 have special parking for our delegates to avoid traffic delays. To execute
this
 event in a smooth way we are placing mesmerizing designs along with comfortable furniture. I look forward to seeing your support to make
this
 event a grand success. Best Regards, Lakshmi.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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