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Do you think English will remain to be a global language despite globalization?

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Globalization
 is one of the processes to increase business productivity. In the
last
 few decades,
globalization
 has strengthened and many countries like India came to foreign states. In
this
 ,process global accent
also
 plays a vital role in the development of businesses.
This
 essay will illustrate the importance of
English
 as a global accent in the
globalization
 process. On the one side,
English
 is the most used
language
 around the world. Many communities use
English
 as their accent for communication purposes. To develop the business, the technology, etc proper communication is important. Most countries around the world prefer
English
 as their
second
language
.
For instance
, in India
English
 is the
second
language
 along with
Change the article
the
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Hindi
language
.
On the other hand
, Even though Hindi is the common
language
 and prominent in India, it will not replace the
English
language
. In
Globalization
, telecommunication
also
 plays a vital role in the nation. In
this
 conversion process,
English
 have its prominence to develop the business. In my opinion, I think
English
 plays a crucial role and it is necessary for better communication. To sum up,
Globalization
 has a global
language
 as
English
.
Submitted by madarapulavanya1998 on

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