Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
People
should stick with science to cure their illnesses. There is a negative new trend of Use synonyms
people
trying methods other than science-backed Use synonyms
medicine
. Use synonyms
Medicine
is developing rapidly, and most of the Use synonyms
alternatives
are fraud. Below I explain two main reasons why Use synonyms
this
trend is hurtful.
Doctors are graduated, and they are privileged to cure our illnesses. There are strict controls on their quality of work. Their education in universities is reliable and based on scientific methods. Linking Words
In contrast
, Linking Words
alternatives
are unreliable and may hurt us because these Use synonyms
alternatives
are from Use synonyms
people
the government hasn’t any control over. Use synonyms
For example
, there is a religious medical centre in our country Linking Words
that is
strongly suggested not to visit, and Linking Words
this
kind of Linking Words
medicine
hurts many Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
People
’s health is crucial and should be cared for with a method strongly supervised. Any other way than science-backed Use synonyms
medicine
should be prohibited.
Usual science-backed Use synonyms
medicine
is publicly available worldwide, and we can quickly transfer our medical records to another medical centre. Use synonyms
This
helps a lot when we want to change our treatment or doctor. Linking Words
In contrast
, alternative therapies and medicines are available at a limited scope and can’t be replaced easily. Linking Words
For instance
, if there’s a traditional treatment in Iran and an Iranian person wants to immigrate to another country, she will lose track of treatment. Usual Linking Words
medicine
has the enormous advantage of being accepted by every nation.
In conclusion, the recent development on trying medical Use synonyms
alternatives
is negative, and there should be some policies to stop it. Usual Use synonyms
medicine
should be available everywhere. Use synonyms
This
new trend is probably temporary, and Linking Words
people
will avoid it soon.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite