Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,

folks

can just click their fingers to access numerous

information

online regarding the culture and history of certain places.

Hence

a section of society holds a belief that museums are not a prerequisite in

this

millennial era.

This

essay will highlight why

museum

sources

are superior compared to online

information

, along with my perspective regarding

this

issue. On the one hand, the online

information

that

people

received is not fully true, and some of them might be fabricated from the original one, unlike the original source at the

museum

As a result

, the fake

information

that has been spread on any media mass platform will gaslight

people

's mindset about the truth. Recent news by "BBC", has found that at least 32% of the fake

sources

are spread on social media annually in the United States. It is no doubt that today's

people

have an intuitive understanding of how to misuse

this

kind of ever-changing technology.

On the other hand

, the

museum

itself holds a sentimental source in which unavailable online

sources

Therefore

, society needs to evade it from being obsolete as it has a plethora of historical artefacts that are stored there.

For instance

, Malaysia National Museums have more than 500 old artefacts that have been accumulated since the 1900s.

However

, it is undeniable that online

information

can be utilitarian for

people

for example

, there is no limit or geographical boundary for

folks

to find their desired historical

sources

. Despite

this

, it just poses a minor threat to the physical

information

which

folks

can seize at the

museum

. In conclusion,

although

online

sources

might come in handy

in contrast

to physical

sources

, the truth is still vague. I completely agree that museums are still necessary for

folks

to broaden their horizons about historical

information

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