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Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
folks
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 can just click their fingers to access numerous
information
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 online regarding the culture and history of certain places.
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 a section of society holds a belief that museums are not a prerequisite in
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 millennial era.
This
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 essay will highlight why
museum
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sources
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 are superior compared to online
information
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, along with my perspective regarding
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 issue. On the one hand, the online
information
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 that
people
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 received is not fully true, and some of them might be fabricated from the original one, unlike the original source at the
museum
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.
As a result
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, the fake
information
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 that has been spread on any media mass platform will gaslight
people
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's mindset about the truth. Recent news by "BBC", has found that at least 32% of the fake
sources
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 are spread on social media annually in the United States. It is no doubt that today's
people
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 have an intuitive understanding of how to misuse
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 kind of ever-changing technology.
On the other hand
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, the
museum
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 itself holds a sentimental source in which unavailable online
sources
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.
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, society needs to evade it from being obsolete as it has a plethora of historical artefacts that are stored there.
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, Malaysia National Museums have more than 500 old artefacts that have been accumulated since the 1900s.
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, it is undeniable that online
information
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 can be utilitarian for
people
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,
for example
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, there is no limit or geographical boundary for
folks
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 to find their desired historical
sources
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. Despite
this
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, it just poses a minor threat to the physical
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 which
folks
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 can seize at the
museum
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. In conclusion,
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 online
sources
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 might come in handy
in contrast
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 to physical
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, the truth is still vague. I completely agree that museums are still necessary for
folks
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 to broaden their horizons about historical
information
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.
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