You have reserved a holiday apartment in the city for your elderly parents and want to confirm the arrangements. Write a letter to the rental agency. In your letter: confirm the date and time of your parents' arrival explain the special needs that they have, as an elderly couple say how you will organise your parents' arrival and departure.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with reservation Nº 454598 which I booked

last

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month for my parent's vacation. I want to confirm some important points

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inquire about some services that my parents require

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their elderly condition. The arrival date is on Monday, 27th July, and the departure is on Saturday, 1st August. Please let me know if we have the same information. Because of their condition as an elderly couple, my parents need special attention

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as a source of oxygen available in case of health issues. Their food has to be without salt and they can not drink any alcoholic beverage. I have arranged an Uber to pick them up at the airport and transport them to the hotel. They are expected to be in the hotel at 11:00. Please feel free to contact me in case of any additional questions. Yours faithfully,

otiyogThu Jul 11 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a single idea to improve coherence.

task achievement

Provide more details regarding how special needs will be met, if possible.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for the context.

complete response

The letter addresses all the key points mentioned in the task: confirming date and time, explaining special needs, and organizing arrival and departure.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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