You are watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence. You believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter :- Give reason for writing. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do.
Dear Sir/Maam,
I am writing
this
letter in regards to a certain show being broadcasted every morning on your tv channel. It is about crime and it contains murder and violence, which for me, is not suitable for a morning show.
Morning time is when the family start their day in a positive mood. It is also
the time that children like to watch shows on tv. Shows like action, murder and violence are not supposed to be aired in the morning. Seeing that kind of program will not only give a gloomy and negative vibe to adults but also
give ideas to children that might cause them harm
in the future. If possible, I would like you to replace it with educational and entertaining. Add the particle
to harm
For instance
, shows about agriculture, cartoons and inspiration, are the kind of shows that will give positive vibes and learning to the viewers.
Please reconsider my request and I'm hoping you take care of this
matter at your soonest.
Yours faithfully,
AngelSubmitted by angelica
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite