Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
As a result
of the housing Linking Words
crisis
and unemployment, metropolises across the world are full of homeless Use synonyms
people
. Even though governments are solving the Use synonyms
crisis
by, Use synonyms
for example
, banning benches, subsidising housing and encouraging homeless Linking Words
people
to live in rural areas would be more beneficial.
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First
of all, Linking Words
homelessness
is one of the main consequences arising from the housing Use synonyms
crisis
. To clarify, the rents are growing unproportionally fast compared to the medium income growth. Notwithstanding, even when Use synonyms
this
unequal growth doesn't threaten the middle or upper classes, individuals working for a minimum wage are no longer capable of renting a decent apartment. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the other cause of Linking Words
homelessness
is the unemployment Use synonyms
crisis
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, both the Linking Words
people
with a minimum wage and without jobs at all are threatened by the expensive rents of flats and apartments. Use synonyms
As a result
of not being able to pay for it, Linking Words
people
have to live on the streets.
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Nevertheless
, measures to reduce Linking Words
homelessness
are available. One of the main solutions is inviting homeless Use synonyms
people
to leave the city in favour of rural areas, where a variety of cheap houses and jobs are available. Use synonyms
Hence
, Linking Words
people
can work in agriculture for a decent wage and get on their own feet. Use synonyms
Besides
, the other crucial measure is subsidised housing. Take Linking Words
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for
example, Berlin and other major cities municipalities are starting to take the initiative to reduce the apartments' rents and prices artificially in order to make the living in metropolises economically safe.
To conclude, I believe that despite the fact that Add the comma(s)
,for
homelessness
is a major problem in huge cities, countermeasures are possible. In order to battle unemployment, the change of one's living place to a rural area is beneficial. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the current housing Linking Words
crisis
can be resolved with a municipality's actions to reduce the prices.Use synonyms
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