Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?

In

this

modern era, the

use

of smartphones is very common and it is growing day by day. Some parents think that young

children

should not

use

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while some parents believe that they are important to keep in touch with their

children

. In my opinion, I feel that

children

should have smartphones with

internet

access. I think

this

way for two reasons, which I will discuss in

this

essay.

Firstly

,

to begin

with, I would like to say that nowadays,

children

are intelligent enough to understand the correct

use

of the

internet

for their better careers,

such

as using the

internet

for their studies and to be in touch with their friends through WhatsApp, or on any social media site. Even, many classes are online these days. My own personal experience is a compelling example of

this

, when I was in school, we used to study only through textbooks but now my kids, even in school

also

read the study material, which is easily available on the

internet

. They have so much information on the

internet

for one topic, which they can learn easily.

Secondly

, we should limit the

use

of

internet

on the

children

's mobiles, as it is plausible that kids can easily get distracted and could spend their time more on online games and on chatting with their friends.

This

could be solved by minimising the quantity of data on the

internet

on their phones.

Also

, if we make

children

understand and differentiate between the valuable and non-valuable stuff, I believe that they will understand

this

and will limit the

use

of

the

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mobile phones with

internet

for the best

use

, they can. In conclusion, I believe that giving a mobile phone to

children

with

internet

access is not so bad idea

,

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if they are using them in their studies and to keep in touch with friends.

However

, it's our responsibility to keep an eye on them and to teach them the right

use

of the

internet

for their better future.