Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?

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of smartphones is very common and it is growing day by day. Some parents think that young

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should not

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while some parents believe that they are important to keep in touch with their

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. In my opinion, I feel that

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should have smartphones with

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access. I think

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with, I would like to say that nowadays,

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are intelligent enough to understand the correct

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for their better careers,

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as using the

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for their studies and to be in touch with their friends through WhatsApp, or on any social media site. Even, many classes are online these days. My own personal experience is a compelling example of

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, when I was in school, we used to study only through textbooks but now my kids, even in school

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read the study material, which is easily available on the

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. They have so much information on the

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for one topic, which they can learn easily.

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, we should limit the

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of

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on the

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's mobiles, as it is plausible that kids can easily get distracted and could spend their time more on online games and on chatting with their friends.

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could be solved by minimising the quantity of data on the

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on their phones.

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, if we make

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understand and differentiate between the valuable and non-valuable stuff, I believe that they will understand

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and will limit the

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mobile phones with

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for the best

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, they can. In conclusion, I believe that giving a mobile phone to

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with

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access is not so bad idea

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if they are using them in their studies and to keep in touch with friends.

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, it's our responsibility to keep an eye on them and to teach them the right

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of the

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for their better future.