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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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The tourism in
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 has changed since 2015. Many aspects are developed in a lot of cities like: Riyadh, Jeddah , especially in the south of
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it’s
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 called
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 city became the best tourist place around
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 , Because the climate at
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 Extraordinary .
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 picturesque place due to its mountains nature covered withe trees .
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 There is many guides groups they concern to arrange your activities and made a thorough planning for the visitors . Some of
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 advantages The tourism in
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 very affordable . The hotels
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 very comfortable . Tourist places
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 amazing . Restaurants and Cafés
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 international standard.Medical care
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 in high level . Emergency situation 7/24 . I would like to talk about 2030 vision of
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 .
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 consider a qualitative leap for the kingdom of
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.
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 a
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 project that aims to improve the economy of
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 of depending on oil. So, I think
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 project will be a Qualitative leap in
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 tourism.
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 it's the biggest country for Islamic people. There are many spiritual spots that people come to visit from around the world like : Makkah and Madinah. I would like to talk about my favorite part of
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 Arabis, The coastal city ex:Jeddah, Jazan, Khobar and yonboa. These cities it's an amazing places and tourist attractions. There is much of resorts, restaurants, hotels on sea view with fun-filled staying .
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 incredible spot and many many of different cultures and amazing cosines that make you very happy Ha ha ha . Welcome to
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 counrty.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pivotal
  • revolutionizing
  • indispensable
  • accelerating
  • innovations
  • transformative
  • advancements
  • global connectivity
  • sustainability
  • technological dependence
  • counterpoint
  • long-term consequences
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