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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper book will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Globalization of the internet through the continents is allowing the majority to have access to lots of information including
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. There is an idea being claimed by a number of people that paper
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 are about to get lost due to
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, while others believe that paper-based
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 will never vanish. In my opinion, due to the availability of different types along with time-saving of the reader, electronic
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 will continue to increase in need,
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 paper
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also
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 have their importance and they will keep being a part of the reader’s life.
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 with, the development of the internet has positively affected the way people read.
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, for the
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 couple, of years numerous electronic versions of new and historical
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 are uploaded to the internet from where a person can get his lovely book not regarding his location.
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, a recent survey conducted by Oxford University asked 100 students to find historical
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 (some of which do not exist in paper versions) around the Bristol libraries, surprisingly 98% of students found
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 in e-version.
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, the trend of electronic
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 led to saving vast time, especially in student life.
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 to say, when there are examinations or assignments upcoming, students may find
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 handier rather than going to the libraries since it saves their precious time.
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, handbooks had been a part of humanity and will continue their importance. With the help of paper-based,
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 our ancestors left essential education for hundreds of years.
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, a physical book is less stressful compared to
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 (the majority of ads may appear while reading) that
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 many to prefer paper-based ones. Way of conclusion, though handbooks have importance and good feelings during the reading which can not be replaced by
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, electronic types will be in much demand in close future for their benefits mentioned above.
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