You have received a letter from your neighbour complaining about noise from your house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter explain the cause of the noise apologise for the noise describe what action you will take to solve the problem Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ………………. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

#neighbour #noise #house #apologise #action #addresses #minutes

Dear Sam, I hope you and your family are in good spirits. I received your letter yesterday and I offer my deepest apology for causing any disturbance because of loud

music

Firstly

, I incorporate

music

into my workout sessions each and every day, without fail. That being said, I was not aware of the fact that you were being bogged down by it, honestly speaking.

Secondly

, there are no

such

restrictions on playing loud

music

in our society, The Santushti Apartments. So, I didn't think of taking any approvals beforehand. Considering all the above, I would like to apologize for my innocent mistake and I will certainly make sure that I am under the limit when it comes to playing

music

Also

, I am willing to use my headphones if I start my fitness session in the evening, ensuring that neighbours are left undisturbed, especially the children who study at

such

hours. Anyway, It has been a while since I

last

saw you personally. Let us meet on the weekends over a few drinks. I look forward to meeting you soon. Warm regards, Utsav

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

184 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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