Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include: Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement
Dear Sir/Maam,
I am writing
this
letter in regards to your latest edition of Travel Magazine that was released in the market recently. I have always liked to travel to other places since I was young. It amazes me how beautiful a place can be and it made me want for more. Being an avid reader of Travel Magazine, I use it as a reference to the places that are worth visiting. As always, you never failed to impress me, I like how you are detailed about a place you visited. the tourist spots, cuisine and staycation are spot-on. However
, there is one tiny problem, you are too focused on the asset of the area, but with little information about its handicap. As I have been following your work for years, it would be great if you also
add in your magazine the cons of visiting a place, for instance
, how secure it is, the prices and transport. That way, people will be aware and prepare if they plan to visit.
I hope you consider my suggestion.
Yours faithfully,
AngelSubmitted by angelica
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.