You are planning to give a party at home. You want to cook a meal for this party and decided to ask a friend for a recipe from his/her country. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - Tell the friend why you are giving this party - Explain why you want a recipe from his/her country - Invite your friend to the party

#party #home #cook #friend #recipe #country

Dear Claire, How are you and your family? I am writing

this

letter because I want you to share your mother’s Filipino recipe to make for a party at my house the day after tomorrow. I am having

this

party for my community friends. Since they are from the Philippines and India, I thought of asking you to help me with the recipe of Pancit Bihon as you are from there. I need to send links or call me as I need to get the ingredients to make

this

main course dish. I am inviting you to please attend

this

party as you can meet other Filipinas and make friends since you are new to the city. I would love for you to come home to help make the dish as it is my

first

time trying to cook your version. See you soon and try to come a little early for us to have fun cooking together. Warm wishes, Param

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

161 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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