QUESTION; In many countries plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do u think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In most nations,

rubber

holders

are

commonly

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used than before as most eatery firms

makes

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the most

use

of

it

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them

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.

This

essay will argue that despite

rubber

holders

becoming popular, the demerits of Cuisine organisation using them to parcel

foods

for

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apply

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exceeds the merits.

Afterwards

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a meaningful conclusion shall be drawn.

Firstly

availability of rubbers is one of the enormous reasons making it to be commonly used.

This

is because firms and other factories that solely produce these

containers

have been established and in full operation.

As a result

, it has become very easy for one to have access to rubbers which

is

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are

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used in packaging

foods

and

drink

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drinks

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for sale or on daily basis.

Furthermore

, the attractive nature it gives to

foods

and drinks after

use

cause most institutions to

use

rubber

holders

. Some are made into nice designs with various colours and so when used it attract customers to buy them.

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. it was revealed that about 75% of customers who consume drinks prefer

rubber

containers

because to them, it is appealing

Thus

how nice and easy it is to get

rubber

holders

, accounts for the increase in

use

. Despite the beauty it gives food and how readily available it is to get them,

rubber

containers

cannot go without a challenge and one of them is the health problems

it

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pose

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to users. A key factor to

this

is that the

containers

are made up of certain harmful substances which react with warm

foods

when placed into them releasing

it

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their

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content and poisoning the food even before it

is consume

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is consumed

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.As

this

continue , it leads to diseases like cancers and heart diseases over time. More so, these

rubber

containers

after

use

are not properly disposed

off

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but

left

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are left

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all over choking gutters when it rains rendering

lot

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of people homeless because of

flood

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the flood

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.

For instance

, the NDAMO coordinator announced that the recent flooding of Accra was a result of

rubber

containers

blocking major gutters.

Thus

the lives and health of people are at risk with the

increase

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increased

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use

of

rubber

containers

. In Conclusion, after examining the benefits and

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drawbacks

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draw backs

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drawbacks

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. it is felt that the drawbacks far outweigh the benefits. I will

therefore

recommend that the

use

of

rubber

holders

be

ban

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.