Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offence while other say they should be free to make noise without limitations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some purpose to view extra
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noise
as an unlawful act, whereas others say that there should be no restrictions to make loud sounds. In
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will discuss both views and share
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opinion
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.
To begin
with, noice can cause
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disturbance
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, especially in the evening when most of the people come from work, and try to take a rest. Noice is mostly irritating, and as a consequence, it makes attempts of people to relax, almost impossible to achieve.
Thus
, it leads to anxiety, and
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anxiety
may lead to health issues,
such
as hearing problems, high blood pressure, and in the most serious cases, heart attack.
Therefore
, if someone makes a noise, he/she should be punished.
On the other hand
, in some cases, noise is unavoidable.
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music bands playing music, without
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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