Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is believed by some that

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negative impact of

travels

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should be resolved with a ban

of

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international

travel

. The negative outcome of international

travels

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can be easily seen in places with fragile nature that

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been destroyed by crowds of people.

Nevertheless

, I firmly disagree with the stated viewpoint as I believe

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right to discover the world.

Furthermore

, sustainable ways to

travel

internationally are plausible to be found.

FIrst

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of all, I disagree with international

travel

restrictions, since the act of discovery is crucial for every person. To clarify

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travels to the edge of the world tend to change mindsets and make individuals more tolerant. A person who, let us consider, hasn'

t

ever

traveled

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outside one's county wouldn'

t

be as likely to be as open-minded as a

travel

lover. It is due to the fact that different countries

seen

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and diverse cultures

experienced

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make

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the

traveler

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open to other experiences and mindsets.

Moreover

,

such

an open-minded person would be more likely to be cautious and caring about the

environment

.

Besides

, international

travel

can be sustainable as well,

thus

it shouldn'

t

be banned or restricted. Even though trips by plane and tours

of

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travel

agencies are harmful to

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nature, sensible ways to

travel

also

exist.

For example

, a hitchhiker or a hiker,

traveling

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travelling

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nature-friendly, is more attentive and respective to the surroundings, the

environment

included. To conclude,

environment

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the environment

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must be protected and saved.

Nevertheless

, international

travel

shouldn'

t

be hold

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as a scapegoat. Travelling across

the

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borders,

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can be sustainable as well, broaden people's minds and make them more caring about each other and the

environment

.

Hence

, the restriction of international trips most likely would be counterproductive.