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In spite of the advances made in agricultural, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Especially since the beginning of the
last
 quarter of the 20th century, science has made the agricultural field easy to do with the advent of machines,
however
, still people around the globe suffer hunger. A myriad of factors is responsible for
this
 which can be sorted out by giving proper lectures on the benefits which modern machines can bring.
To begin
 with the causes of
this
 scenario, in spite of, how much the world has moved from traditional ways of bowing crops with man labour to doing that with advanced technologies, people still lack basic foods on an international scale. The main reason behind
this
, most countries are focusing more on industrialization as it generates a great amount of revenue than the agricultural sector.
For instance
, almost all the western nations' economy runs on industries including the prominent names of Europe, the USA and Australia. Meanwhile only Asia relies on the production of crops to be their main source of income,
subsequently
, there are not adequate resources to feed all the nations which
leads
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 to hunger. to overcome
this
 serious issue, not only The World Health Organization but
also
 the developed countries need to play a vital role to overcome
this
 serious issue.
First
 and foremost, they should organize numerous seminars to spread the advantages of advanced equipment and practice how to employ them in fields, it will help to ease and fasten the work of local farmers.
Secondly
, they must provide special assistance in terms of grants to farmers.
For instance
. the people from east Asia who generates revenues for food are often poor, and financial aid will never restrict them from ploughing agricultural land. In my opinion, developed nations' positive role is required to overcome world hunger with the assistance of WHO as most of the time it is the poorer parts of the earth which severely suffer a shortage of food.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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