Nowadays people like to use new electronic equipment. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, electronic equipment is familiar to most people
due to
the enormous development in technology. In my opinion, I think it made a great change in our life, which is a positive one. These types of equipment facilitate the work and added
joy.
Wrong verb form
add
Firstly
, using electronic devices facilitate
our jobs. using machines made the tasks easier for us. In Correct subject-verb agreement
facilitates
another word
,one of the important features is it Fix the agreement mistake
other words
reduced
the time and effort needed by humans. Wrong verb form
reduces
However
, these devices can be founded
in any part of our lives today and are irreplaceable. Verb problem
found
For example
, the coffee maker and the blender, are mostly used every day, these two machines do a lot of work and processes that needed hours in the past, in just a few minutes. So, is it evidence that electronic devices have made a huge change by making these tasks easier
On the other hand, television, headphones, cameras, computers, ....etc. add a lot of colours to our lives. For instance
, when someone is bored and has no company, he can easily enjoy his time by watching TV or
chatting on Correct word choice
apply
phone
or just browsing the internet. Correct article usage
the phone
furthermore
, there are video games which can be shared between family members or friends, so they can have group fun. In addition
, using computers and e-books for studying leads to make
more research which helps in Verb problem
apply
the
development. Really they made a beautiful difference in our days.
In conclusion, I believe that electronic equipment become an essential part of everyone's day as a positive impact. they make jobs easier and quicker, Correct article usage
apply
also
they Correct word choice
and also
entered
pleasure and entertainment into the human souls.Wrong verb form
enter
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task response
Expand on the negative aspects of electronic equipment to provide a more balanced argument.
coherence and cohesion
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