Some people think certain prisoner should be made unpaid work instead of being put behind bar .. discus it with your own opinion.

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of

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who

convicted

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by court should work for

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instead

of being in the prison. they think

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should

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to make them productive for the

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and

community

.

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totally believe every

country

should prepare themselves to use

prisoners

to

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work

weork

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work

as

unpaid

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worker

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. in

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i

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going to

analysis

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this

argument and its advantages and disadvantages. The

first

reason is that it can be a good way to save money for

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. and

also

,

government

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does not have to pay for some jobs if

prisoners

do that. so, authority not only does not pay money for looking after criminals but

also

,

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do not pay

to

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people

who

doing

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community

services.

for instance

, if convicted persons help old

people

to do their daily tasks, there will be

profit

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for both sides.

However

, relying on

people

who at least once committed

crime

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can be very dangerous for

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the community

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. giving a little freedom to these

people

can have

bad

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effect

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and

subsequently

regret. So,

i

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think leadership should try

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case

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to

counting

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on them. for

examples

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, they should never give permission to a murderer to work as

unpaid

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an unpaid

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worker. whereas, in some

case

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which

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where

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the crime

have

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committed small, it is ok to give

the

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apply

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permission to them. to sum up, the whole world should prepare to give

this

chance to

prisoners

but not all the

prisoners

just

who

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do not

committed

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a big crime. if

this

happen

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,

country

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the country

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will save

large

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amount of money and they can spend on facilities and improvements.