You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Respected Sir, I am writing to express my extreme disappointment with a recent purchase of a camera from your outlet in Dubai, on the 20th of April 2020. Some of the parts are missing from the box that I later realised on reaching Singapore. On 22nd December, I purchased the A3580 model which was supposed to be with the tripod stand from the airport's duty-free Canon outlet. As I was about to board a flight, they gave me sealed packaging and assured me of every part within the package. Along with the camera, I

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purchased an extended international warranty for the product.

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, when I arrived at my Singapore residence, on opening the parcel I noticed that the tripod items are missing from the box. I

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called your international customer care who advised me to contact the local team.

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, I would request you to please deliver the missing items as per my enclosed bill with

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letter at the earliest. If the delivery can not be provided within two days, I would like to get a full refund along with the cost of the additional warranty I had purchased. Looking forward to hearing a prompt response from you. Yours faithfully, Rubina Gill

msrubinagillFri Aug 12 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

205 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

local representative
important items missing
purchase details
model and brand
missing accessories
inconvenience
use to its full extent
urgent request
partial refund
alternative solution
exchange unit
correct the issue
look forward to your prompt response

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