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Writing Samples
Band 7

Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to

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Dead Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to the letter that I received regarding the increase in my insurance premium for my car which I am not happy with. Please allow me to explain. As you know I have been a legit customer with your company for seven years and I have never encountered any accidents all these years in order to claim my Insurance from your organisation.
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, the premium which I have been paying for the service is significantly higher compared to other insurance providers for the same make and model of my car.
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, the reason for the increase of 20% in each month's payment is not justified anywhere with the reasons in the notification letter.
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, I would request you provide the cause of
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 increase,and if I am not satisfied with the justification, I am afraid that I have to break up with your system and continue with a different provider. I look forward to hearing your response, Yours faithfully, Jee

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greeting and closing
Ensure that the greeting at the start of the letter is appropriate and that there is a clear closing statement finishing the correspondence.
single idea per paragraph
Work on structuring your paragraphs logically to ensure that each paragraph presents one clear idea relevant to the purpose of the letter.
task achievement
The ideas and arguments presented need a clearer explanation and better development. Ensure you provide sufficient detail for each point you make.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter, which is polite, formal, and conveys your concerns effectively.
complete response
Your response must fully achieve the task set, which in this case involves explaining your position and detailing the actions you want the company to take. The letter was cut off mid-sentence, indicating an incomplete response.
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