Some people believe that the best way to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people argue that the

quality

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of

healthcare

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in a country is determined by the number of medical staff. I totally agree

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that is

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important, but I

also

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believe that there are many more factors

take

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part in

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problem. On the one hand, I agree that human resources are the key factor

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the

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industry. First of all,

doctors

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and nurses play

in

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important role in taking

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and

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of and

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treatment

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for

the

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patients. If there is no one with them, they not receiving good

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,

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will

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which will

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lead to many

risk

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of

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their condition during

the

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time at the hospital.

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, after the surgery

total

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of total

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hip replacement the patient

need

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time to recover. They would not be able to stand up, to take

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of themselves if there would not

any

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medical staff around to look

after

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,

tell

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them what to do and not to do.

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, doctor and

nurses

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qualification is a determining

factor

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in the

quality

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of

healthcare

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.

Doctors

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need to improve their certifications,

access

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and access

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to

mordern

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modern

techniques for

a

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better

treatment

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.

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,

i

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would like to emphasize the

important

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of

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and facilities, like

private

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a private

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hospital

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hospitals

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in improving the

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of the health

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system. Before

of

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all, the

government

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should pay more attention to public hospitals, creating

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the condition

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condition

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conditions

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for

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the hospital

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hospital

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hospitals

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to improve.

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, the

government

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should support more policies for medical workers to help them stabilize their life to devote the cause of

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.

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, more and more

hospital

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hospitals

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should be

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to

improving

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the

quality

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of health

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. For

instant

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, currently, private

hospital

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hospitals

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like Vinmec invest in many modern machines to help

doctors

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for the

treatment

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more effectively. In conclusion, I agree that training and

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hiring

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more

doctors

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and nurses is

good

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solution to improve the

quality

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of

treatment

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and

care

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for

the

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apply

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patients.

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, I

also

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want

that

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government

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pay

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more attention to help achieve the best

quality

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of

healthcare

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.