Some people believe that the best way to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. Do you agree or disagree?

Healthcare

is a big issue in

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modern

society, not only in Vietnam but

also

over the globe. Most policymakers believe that the best way to improve the

quality

of

healthcare

is to train and hire

more

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professional medical

worker

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. I agree

that is

crucial,

nevertheless

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I personally believe that there are many other factors that improve

this

problem. On one hand, I definitely agree that human resources are the key factor

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the

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healthcare

.

Doctor

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an

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nurses play an essential role

of

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and

healthcare

treatment of patients. If there is a shortage of

this

resourcue

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resource

, the patient will receive insufficient care.

For example

, after

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the earthquake

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earthquake

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earthquakes

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in Turkey and Syria, the shortage of medical

staffs

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staff

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made medical health care in

this country

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chaos.

In addition

, doctor and

nurse's

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qualification is obviously an undeniable factor in the

quality

of

healthcare

service. In recent years, Vietnamese doctors have a huge

opportunities

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to go abroad,

acquirring

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acquiring

modern techniques to treat certain diseases that were considered with poor

prognosis

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decadeds

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decades

ago.

On the other hand

, the government need to invest and allocated to the whole

healthcare

systems

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, not only

for

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medical workers.

In addition

,

healthcare

education for civilization is

essential

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mission

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in order to raise the awareness of the national population in preventing diseases.

Finally

,

facillicies

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facilities

are the contributing factor in improving the

quality

of treatment in our nation. These years, private

hospital

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have already set a standard level in the

quality

of care. For

instances

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, Vinmec Times City International Hospital has become a

stategy

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strategy

member of Cleveland Clinic, steadily standardizing the

healcare

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healthcare

provider.

To conclude

, I do believe that training and recruiting more and more medical

staffs

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is an optimal solution to raise the

quality

of treatment and medical examination.

Nevertheless

, the

important

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of

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the gorvernment

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gorvernment

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government

in contributing

healthcare

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infrastructure is undeniable, to achieve the perfect

quality

of

healthcare

.