Some people believe that the best way to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. Do you agree or disagree?

There are those who opine that the most effective way to increase the

quality

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national

healthcare

is to educate and employ as many health workers as possible. In my opinion, the drawbacks outweigh the merits. There are considerable benefits of increasing the quantity of medical

staff

. The

first

benefit is that every hospital has so many staffs that serve the citizen in any region of that country.

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, people don't need to head to the city

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to cure their diseases. Another merit might be that any specialize in medicine have enough human resources to develop that field.

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lead to the

healthcare

system can develop eurhythmic. There are potential drawbacks

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training and hiring amount of doctors and nurses. The main drawback is that the

quality

education of every

doctors

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or

nurses

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is not guaranteed.

This

is because the medical university can not teach a lot of

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at the same time.

This

problem could affect the ability

of taking

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patient

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in their career. That

lead

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to

the

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decreasing

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of

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quality

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healthcare

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system. The other disadvantage might be that the salary budget can not cover enough a huge medical

staff

. The living expenses

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more

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higher can distract medical

staff

from their work in

hospital

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. they can not concentrate of take care

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patient

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so the

quality

of health care can not improve. In conclusion, the drawbacks of overload students lead to bad

quality

education in university and the limit of

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salary

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budget

buget

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budget

for medicine seem to outweigh the merits of enough employee in every hospital and every

specialize

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in medicine. Given

this

situation, it seems that the government should pay more attention

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other area

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another area

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of

healthcare

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system

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such

as

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quality

quanlity

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quality

training or

healthcare

insurance

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in stead

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of

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increasing

increseaing

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increasing

more and more medical

staff

.