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Some people believe that medical doctors should also be academic researchers at the same time. Do you agree or disagree?

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Evidence-based medicine
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 been dramatically raising in
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 years. More and more
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 become clinical researchers in many hospitals globally. Some people believe that treating
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patients and researching are
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different jobs. But in my opinion, medical
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 should do treatment of the patient and perform clinical
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 in parallel because of many benefits to both
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 and patients. There are many reasons why medical
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 need to do
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 in
clinical
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setting
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.
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 meet and talk with the patient daily,
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, they can find out the problems and the demands of the patients better than scientists in
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laboratories
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, medical
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 propose more
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 following the real condition of diseases. Actually, many famous
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 in the world were from medical
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doctors'
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 thoughts. Alexandre Yersin explored the vaccine against
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rabies which saved millions of children over the world,
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, in many developing countries
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 as Vietnam.
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,
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 have to learn
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more knowledge
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nowadays
. Treatment regimens, diagnostic methods and medications have changed day by day.
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, new diseases and bacteria can appeal anywhere. And
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' mission is to find the corresponding curable methods. Doing
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clinical trials is the best way to find out more new
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efficacious
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 medications.
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, the pandemic COVID-19 killed millions of people and caused
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 economic crisis worldwide. Medical
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 have done clinical trials to confirm that molnupiravir can cure the disease, after that, the pandemic was
controled
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controlled
 gradually. And our
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 become normal today.
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 can
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 teach many students throughout doing research. Many
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also
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 are teachers in medical universities. They train more young
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 to
pratice
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practice
practise
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practice
. In conclusion, doing research is crucial in modern medicine. Medical
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 should carry out more
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, especially clinical trials, to improve the treatment
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.
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