Some people believe that medical doctors should also be academic researchers at the same time. Do you agree or disagree?

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The modern
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medicine
medinice
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medicine
develops dramatically in recent years.
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requires the
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to extend their role, not only in treating the
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but
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part in medical trials.
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many people accept
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fact, I would insist that
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doctors
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should focus on the
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. On the one hand, treatment is not easy.
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of all, the development of medical techniques
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as CT, MRI,
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scans... helps to detect new diseases.
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, the
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must update
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knowledge and state-of-the-art techniques to improve healthcare qualities and they have no time for researching
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their own.
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, the future of medicine is individual treatment.
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means that each patient needs a specific approach and treatment. The time for each patient will increase. There is no doubt that the physicians couldn't join any studies.
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, it is true to say that an academic researcher needs different qualities from a clinician.
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, a researcher needs to be good at mathematics.
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is far from the daily practice of a doctor.
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, a good cardiologist will need to be good at clinical examination, hearing the heart sounds,
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familiar with cardiovascular medicine. There is no way to help him to be a mathematician with his learning or routine practice.
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, it takes many years to become good
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. They spend a large part of their life in the hospital: staying with
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, acquiring new skills,
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countless night shifts. I'm sure that the academic
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will invite them to join,
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will raise the question of wasting their talents for
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wrong purpose. In conclusion, being good
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and academic researchers at the same time appears to be a new concept. Personally, I hold the idea of keeping
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traditional
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tradiotional
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traditional
role of
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. The
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need them, not researchers.
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