Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Humans today have become part of global citizens. Some
people
believe it is essential to travel to learn about other countries
, while
others think it is not necessary. I contend that people
can learn from other countries
by using online platforms. This
essay will explore both points of view and address my conclusion about the statement.
On the one hand, media online really helps people
to study about other countries
. For example
, there are so many videos on YouTube that people
can access to understand cultures, languages, food, et cetera from other countries
. Additionally
, society also
can get many resources about other countries
on Google. The increasing number of internet users makes information more accessible. Thus
, it is possible for people
to acquire knowledge about other countries
without visiting that country
.
On the other hand
, travelling to other countries
costs a lot. For instance
, if you are a citizen from
Indonesia and want to learn about Japan, you need around 7 million rupiah per flight to go there. Change preposition
of
This
is not effective for some citizens, especially if you do not have enough money to afford it. Therefore
, visiting other countries
is not applicable for all people
.
In conclusion, going to other countries
is not the only option for learning its country
. Technologies allow people
to access information about other nations, I undoubtedly disagree with the idea people
should go to other countries
to study that country
. It is good to visit another country
to gain more information that people
can not get in the media, but it is not mandatory.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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task achievement
Ensure that all main points are thoroughly developed with specific examples and supporting details.
coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence, use a wider variety of linking words and phrases.
task achievement
Make sure to address the opposing view more robustly to demonstrate a balanced discussion.
coherence cohesion
The introduction clearly states the topic and presents a clear opinion.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a logical structure with a clear progression of ideas from one paragraph to the next.
task achievement
Good use of specific examples, such as the reference to YouTube and Google, to illustrate main points.