An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What are the problems associated with and some possible solutions?

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and the changes in
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from 1999 to 2008. It is obvious that both
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its peak in 2001. In 1999,
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started in about 290
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and 460
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in 2006.In comparison,there was a little drop before the
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got to 400
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increased by
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,to 420
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from 2007 to 2008. The figure of net began at about 170
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and dropped to its lowest figure,about 150
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in 2003.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Skilled labor
  • Developed nations
  • Essential services
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Economic impact
  • Social impact
  • Migration
  • Inequality
  • Disparity
  • Foreign aid
  • Investment
  • Community
  • Dependency
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