Write a letter to the Planning Manager of your local council about a historical building in your area that is about to be pulled down due to the lack of money to repair it. In your letter: State why the building is important What the building can be used for in the future Suggest ways for paying for the repairs
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to the demolish the historical building at my place which is located on Kent Street. As it is old and getting damaged it requires to renovate as soon as possible.
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In addition
, our area is popular and named after that complex because it is a beautifully constructed complex in 1960 by the Nizam ruler. Linking Words
Moreover
, the design of walls, doors and windows are handmade. and rocks used to construct are not available now, which shows the material quality and architecture of those days. It was Linking Words
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a popular tourist spot. Linking Words
However
, today the building is abandoned due to its age and needs to be repaired.
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further
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can be used for museum purposes which would be precious for Linking Words
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also
to keep in touch with historical facts and the beauty of Linking Words
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building will attract more foreignersLinking Words
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, on the other hand,
on the other hand
it can be used as a library.
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Furthermore
, I want to recommend you utilize the government funds for Linking Words
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otherwise
, citizens of my area agree to contribute some funds to renovate of symbolic momentum of heritage.
Waiting for your prompt service.
Yours faithfully,
Karan Mummaneni.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite