More and more people decide to undergo plastic surgeries these days.‎ Discuss both pros and cons of this issue.‎

Nowadays, the percentage of

people

who

has

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taken the decision to have

a

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plastic

surgery

has increased. The main benefits are higher

self-

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self-esteem

steem

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esteem

and

people

acquiere

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acquire

a decent

job

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jobs

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;

however

, the drawbacks are that citizens have to spend a lot of money

for

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and the death

indice

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indices

has increased for malpractice. Most

of

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the

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people

are not happy with their

appearance

in life, so many of them choose to have

a

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plastic

surgery

to have

a

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apply

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better physical characteristics and high

self-

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self-esteem

steem

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esteem

them

steam

. Once

people

got the

surgery

, they love what they see reflected

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the

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mirror

morrow

mirrow

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mirror

.

Also

, some of them will have a better life. More importantly, the concept they have about their

appearance

is more positive to reach their goals in life.

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Furthermore

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Furthermore

, there are many companies that hire

people

by

the

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physical

appearance

, so these citizens that have had

a

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plastic

surgery

will have greater opportunities to be hired.

For instance

, In The United

States

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most of the individuals who work for

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customer

customers

custumer

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customer

service

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services

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are hired based on their physical

aspect

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aspects

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such

as light skin and

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the color

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color

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colour

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of

the

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eyes. One of the drawbacks is that

people

who have experienced

a

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plastic

surgery

need to spend too much money to improve their

appearance

.

This

make

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them

to

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ask for a loan

to

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from

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the bank that later on they will

paid

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with

a

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high interest. Another disadvantage is that many

people

have died due to

mal- practice

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during the

surgery

. On top of

this

, many of these doctors face no legal consequences and they keep their jobs as

nothing

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if nothing

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has happened.

As a result

, society is getting

accoustum

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accustom

accosted

to hear that an individual has died by trying to have

a

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plastic

surgery

. To explain

myself

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further

, Los Angeles

is well know

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to have many clinics where some

people

look for their services;

however

, the university of Fullerton presents a recent study that

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reveals

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revels

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that fifteen

percent

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per cent

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of

these society

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will lose their lives by going under

plastic

surgery

. To conclude, wanting to have a better physical

appearance

is the most

desire

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thing to

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acquire

acquiere

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acquire

;

however

, the drawbacks outweigh the advantages, and

this

is not worth it to do it.