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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
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Talking about the technology development nowadays really affecting many sides of our life which
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 develop and change as
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 goes by.
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a thing that we usually do on a daily basis is read
books
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 or
newspapers
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. Seeing that phenomenon I agree if we go over the years in the future and even right now we will change our ways,
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 reading
books
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 or
newspapers
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 in an online form. News
information
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 and
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books
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 that are provided on the internet or online way really help us in many ways, as an example there is a service for
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 subscriptions or easy
access
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 for people online, in line with nowadays people's schedules and
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 on taking
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 or
newspapers
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 make it more effective and efficient. In between our
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 at work or when we have a little free
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 in the morning, we can directly open through our smartphones anywhere and anytime without having to bring the printed
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 or bring it in physically. Other than that, because of the wide
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 on the internet to the news, we have so many sources to read
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 so we can choose which is more accurate and valid.
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, the speed of
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 dissemination recently is faster, so we can get more writing up to date.
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, discuss
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, right now there are lots of platforms that we can subscribe to so we can read not just
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book
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 only.
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 means that we don't have to pay for that particular
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 as before. But now we can choose whether we will buy
books
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 just for each of them or directly make a subscription because it will be more efficient where we can pay
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 month and we are free to choose which
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 we will read according to our individual preferences.
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, there are
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 many contradictory things that occur including the supply of
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 and
newspapers
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 that we can find on the internet, many websites give you
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 to download
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 illegally and
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 is a disadvantage to the author of the
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 or the owner where we should pay as author credits. To sum up,
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 topic is
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 of the positive impacts of technology, it gives us the facility and easiness to read
books
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 or get news
information
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. Even
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 negative side to it as we mentioned before that there will always be illegal
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 to get it. It is our responsibility to do so.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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