You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job Say what else you could do for the family Give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Mr and Mrs Richerds, I am Supun from Sri Lanka, and I am writing

this

with regards to the advertisement that I read in the "Sunday Times" on 24th September 2022.

To begin

with, let me explain my qualifications and brief description of myself. Currently, I am a tutor at the Sri Lankan language school. There, I am teaching Spanish and French languages to kids like yours.

In addition

to my teaching skills, I am quite good at gardening and cooking.

Moreover

, I have worked in a well-known Sri Lankan family restaurant, so I am well experienced in organizing small family parties as well.

Finally

, let me explain why I am so desperate to have a job. I will be visiting Australia in the

month for research that I am going to do with Melbourne university. So it would be great if I can have a part-time job at that time to cover my expenses. It would be great if can reply to me as soon as possible, so I can arrange it myself as it is. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Supun

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TESOL certification
Experience in teaching children
Knowledge of Australian culture
Passion for language education
Flexible and adaptable
Design customized lesson plans
Patient and understanding
Strong communication skills
Interpersonal skills
Participate in family activities
Enthusiasm for cultural exchange

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