letter to manager for attending a training program

Dear
Mr.
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Fahad I would like to
informe
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inform
you about my desire to
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training
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program
abou
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about
( Health and workout
Bthat
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B that
will
held
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at 5th
next
month . It's really important to me . I definitely need to enhance and improve myself to be
healthier
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a healthier
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coach . I
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interested
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body
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and
teach
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people how can they
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their own healthy lifestyle
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healthy
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and strong body . Yea
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