Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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Issues of animal experimentation have been going on for some time now, especially in the media.

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, there has been an argument in some quarters that the testing of

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should be prohibited but other folks believe that animal testing can offer striking benefits to humanity.

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essay will look at two reasons why I think using

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for experiments is a bad idea and why other options

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as green vegetation, trees and fruits should be considered. The priority of medical exploration has always prevailed over the pains and suffering of

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. Some people who support these experiments say that we must tests

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, many popular lifesaving drugs were invented

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way, and animal experiments may help us to find more cures in the future. Indeed, possibly a cure for cancer and AIDS.

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, it is believed that animal experimentation is necessary for human survival. Due to the extreme value placed on human lives, outcomes of research, like vaccines, are often tested on

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before acceptance by the general population.

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, I do not believe these arguments stand up to scrutiny.

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, it has been shown on numerous occasions by secret filming in laboratories via animal rights groups that

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feel as much pain as humans do, and they suffer when they are kept in cages for long periods.

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, a substantial amount of animal research is done for cosmetics, not to find cures for diseases, so

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is unnecessary.

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, it has

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been proven that humans can get all the nutrients and vitamins that they need from green vegetables and fruit.

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, again, having to kill

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for research is not an adequate argument. In conclusion, I am of the opinion, on balance, that the benefits do not outweigh the disadvantages, and testing on

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should not continue.

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it may improve the lives of humans, it is not fair that

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should suffer in order to achieve

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Your opinion

More and more young people are watching real-life violence due to the growth of online videos on social networks. This could cause societal problems in the future. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

Comleing university education is thought some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

More and more students are moving abroad for higher education. There are people who think there is an advantage to it but a few say that there are some drawbacks as well. What can be the merits and demerits of studying abroad?

To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.