Some think schools should rewards students who have the best academic results, while others think it’s more important to reward students who achieve other types of success (such as sports, music, and good behavior). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Schools occupy an important place in student's life, making the youth spend many hours daily in classrooms. While some schools choose to reward hard work and
students
who achieve high academic results, others think that it's more important to reward the ones who prioritize extra-curricular activities Use synonyms
such
as sports or music. Linking Words
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essay will discuss both views.
On one hand, some institutes choose to prioritize studies, making subjects Linking Words
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as maths, physics and biology fundamental. Obviously, Linking Words
this
has a positive impact on some Linking Words
students
as it makes them more motivated to achieve higher grades, and it's especially advantageous for smarter Use synonyms
students
with potentially a higher intelligence quotient. To illustrate that, well-known universities, Use synonyms
such
as Harvard or Cambridge, offer special scholarships for high school graduates who achieve the best academic results during their curriculum.
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, it is just as important to prioritize other types of success Linking Words
besides
studies. Sports, music and other extra-curricular activities should Linking Words
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occupy an important part of school planning. Many undergraduates are blessed with particular talents, which makes them achieve great results. Some scholarships, Linking Words
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students
who are particularly talented in physical activities Use synonyms
such
as swimming or soccer, making them eligible for higher status, Linking Words
for instance
playing in national teams.
To summarize, I personally think that both sides should be equal and balanced. While some undergraduates are elites in academic studies, others shine in sports or music, making all of them worth rewarding for the sake of keeping their motivation up and Linking Words
therefore
pushing them to their full potential.Linking Words
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