Both governments and individuals are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitat.This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care.

It is believed by some that ,spending

money

on natural habitats and

species

is a waste

instead

authorities and individuals need to display

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commoner's necessities and health problems.I reckon that one's health and needs are more important than protecting nature. On one hand,endangered

species

and the whole environment is

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responsibility of mankind.Due to that ,fact innumerable citizens are trying to protect wildlife with the help of authorities and unions.Because these

species

are the living things that maintain the balance of ecology.,

Also

they are a reason for a tourist attraction in one direction

however

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the maintenance of endangered

species

cost a chunk of

money

,not only the foods but

also

their vitamins and minerals.When there

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a plethora of social problems are retained in society governors should divert their attention toward people.

For example

,In Sri Lanka government has separated

money

for the maintenance of endangered

species

and habitats.

On the other hand

,In ,

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there are individuals who are in shortage of assistance

such

as shelter,Toilets, and Water.Due to the shortage of ,

money

they can not pay for a proper meal per day,not only the elders who face

this

dilemma but

also

children are suffering from diseases like marasmus, and diarrhoea.Because they do not even have a proper drainage system due to the poor function of government.

Moreover

,The cost of daily drugs has been inflated with the economy,if authorities were to fund 50% for health needs elderly people able to pay for their monthly prescription of medicines.

This

will reduce their financial burden to some extent. To conclude,In my ,opinion I think that social necessities and individual physical needs deserve more attention rather than animals.