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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear
Mr.
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 Smith, I am writing to withdraw my admission from your part-time evening
course
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 which you recently started on the topic of financial planning. My name is Tom Hardy and I work as a sales manager. Recently, around 10
days
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 back, I enrolled for your financial planning
course
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, and I particularly opted for your institute because, here, it is being offered as
part-time
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 evening
course
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.
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 I have attended it for around 7
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, now I am finding it very difficult to continue it along with my job. I work full-time with Walmart and most of the time it requires
to
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 stay back till late.
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 why I was not able to attend the class for
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last
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the last
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 3
days
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. Due to
above mentioned
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 situation, it will be really difficult for me to continue, so I want to request you to refund my fees paid for
this
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course
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. I understand that it will be a loss for you, so in order to compensate that you may deduct the amount for the 10
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 on
pro-rata
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a pro-rata
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 basis. I hope you will consider my case favourably. Yours sincerely, Tom Hardy
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