Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contract between countries is a positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that more
people
are likely to raise economics or even support cultural contact between society as a beneficial development.
This
trend has caused some controversial opinions, whether others think that many countries will lose their national identities
as a result
. In
this
essay, I will elaborate on both sides and
then
state my position. On the
first
hand, the reason community state that the benefits
in
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progress economics and transfer of traditional cultures. Is that many merchants import our
products
that will bring our domestic to get access to the foreigners, if the
products
serve more for their life, that will make them know and inspired about our strengths in making those
products
. Take a good example of it is that when reminded about the most enduring and simple automobiles that will make many
people
remember
Japan
which
country
has strength in producing cars. Almost cars are popular in Western
Japan
vehicles, many famous brands
such
as Lexus, Toyota, Honda, Mitsubishi, Mazda, Nissan and others else.
In addition
,
China
a
country
that serves a large number of
products
for the world, is
China
, the manufacturer in the world.
In particular
,
this
country
is well-known for technology, over 90% of the phones we use are made in
China
.
Besides
, the development of economics
also
led to more
people
's access to foreigners as
Japan
and
China
a common language that attracts many
people
to learn because they want to work and get access which developed regions like
China
and
Japan
. The matter, the globalization, many newcomers will make our state easy to impart our history, culture, and traditional lifestyle. On the
second
hand, others hold that their
country
will lose their national identities, which is a
also
persuading explanation.
In particular
, Vietnam's traditional wear of
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Dai
in Vietnam had been changing remarkably and still has been the accession of many modernised clothes from the Western, and until now the designs of
Ao
Dai
have been changing more than in the past to serve the fabulous view and comfortable wearing of the crowd. Because, many public
also
agree that the origin of
Ao
Dai
is very inconvenient for their work, and their activities every day. And nearly the origin of
Ao
Dai
design had been modernised,
besides
that, the situation of wearing
Ao
Dai
is close to appearing in women, and it is very rare to see men wear
Ao
Dai
. It cannot be denied
that is
a great effect on traditions and culture in many countries. To conclude, increasing the development of business and cultural contact is advanced progress or the matter it will affect
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national value that I think it both vital, both have good faces and bad faces.
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