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‘A country’s museums should always be free for people to visit, whatever the visitor’s age, income or nationality.’ To what level do you agree with this idea? Should museums always be free for all visitors?

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The
museums
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 are one of the best places that
people
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 can visit from time to time.
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, some believe it should not charge
people
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 regardless of how old are they, where are they born, and how much is their salary. I partly agree with
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 statement and in the following essay, the reasons will be discussed. on the one hand,
museums
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 are the best place for
people
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 not only to get to know their historical background but
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 help
people
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 to get familiar with their own traditional food, costumes, and the way their ancestors lived. Defining the price for
tickets
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 may prevent
people
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 to become knowledgeable, especially those who cannot afford their life with their salary.
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, youngsters may not be able to purchase
tickets
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.
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 some
people
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 may think children do not need to reach to the museum, in my point of view facing the mentioned arguments would have played a vital role in their life.
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, there is a group of
people
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 who are concerned about the nationality of visitors, I personally think the more diverse nation the more Improvement in worldwide view.
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, maintaining
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 needs a large amount of money. Paying a salary to those who work there, cleaning, and repairing are some of the examples of why
tickets
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 should not be free.
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 the money that comes from
tickets
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 should not be the only source of
museums
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’ income, the government should spend a lot of money on
museums
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. In order to government support
museums
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 can adopt different strategies
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 as giving discounts for students or coupons for families. In conclusion, Museum should offer their ticket at a reasonable price to whom are not able to pay for the
tickets
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 or are not old enough to buy the
tickets
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 and even
people
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 who are from other countries should have the ability to take a look at the Museum at least once in a lifetime.
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