‘A country’s museums should always be free for people to visit, whatever the visitor’s age, income or nationality.’ To what level do you agree with this idea? Should museums always be free for all visitors?

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The

museums

are one of the best places that

people

can visit from time to time.

however

, some believe it should not charge

people

regardless of how old are they, where are they born, and how much is their salary. I partly agree with

this

statement and in the following essay, the reasons will be discussed. on the one hand,

museums

are the best place for

people

not only to get to know their historical background but

also

help

people

to get familiar with their own traditional food, costumes, and the way their ancestors lived. Defining the price for

tickets

may prevent

people

to become knowledgeable, especially those who cannot afford their life with their salary.

Also

, youngsters may not be able to purchase

tickets

Although

some

people

may think children do not need to reach to the museum, in my point of view facing the mentioned arguments would have played a vital role in their life.

In addition

, there is a group of

people

who are concerned about the nationality of visitors, I personally think the more diverse nation the more Improvement in worldwide view.

On the other hand

, maintaining

Museums

needs a large amount of money. Paying a salary to those who work there, cleaning, and repairing are some of the examples of why

tickets

should not be free.

Although

the money that comes from

tickets

should not be the only source of

museums

’ income, the government should spend a lot of money on

museums

. In order to government support

museums

can adopt different strategies

such

as giving discounts for students or coupons for families. In conclusion, Museum should offer their ticket at a reasonable price to whom are not able to pay for the

tickets

or are not old enough to buy the

tickets

and even

people

who are from other countries should have the ability to take a look at the Museum at least once in a lifetime.

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