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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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People are more dependent on
technology
 today than ever before.
However
, the dependency is not
completely
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 advantageous or disadvantageous. I agree more with the development of
positive
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the positive
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 impact of
technology
in
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 changes
of
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 communication.
This
 will be shown by discussing
at
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how
knowledge
 and understanding of a
person
 of the internet
affects
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 the usage. A
person
 with higher
knowledge
 of
technology
 will easily be able to get their way around the complexity of it with ease and be
easily
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 friends with someone on the internet and a
potential
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 positive relationship could result from it.
For example
, many people earlier could not speak to someone because they did not know how to use
a
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technology
 to communicate. But as they got more information about it, they increased communication and in the process developed new contacts and strengthened previous existing connections. The understanding of
technology
 is a very important factor as well.
For example
, one and the other
person
 who
live
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 in the same vicinity may not use the same
technology
. I once searched for an old friend of mine
in
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 the wrong website and later on found out after meeting him in real life that he was using an entirely different website.
Similarly
, when looking to make new affiliations a
person
 may end up acquainting a harmful
person
 in a bad website but if they are given prior
knowledge
 it will help them to know where to look and what to look for. To conclude,
although
 both advantages and disadvantages are there, as a
person
 spends more time with a certain
technology
, the more
knowledge
 and understanding they will have of it and will have a more progressive way to develop new affairs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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