You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

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Dear Sara, Thanks for your letter and the superb photos, it was great to hear all about your holiday, and it sounds like you had a fantastic time in Dubai.

Furthermore

, I am writing

this

letter to invite you to my birthday party. I am sure you will be amazed when you read

this

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that my parents organizing a grand celebration on my birthday due to I received fantastic grades in my matriculation exam;

however

, my all friends are coming

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which you are on the top of the list.

In addition

, the party venue has been decided and it is near to my house a club named Hilton Banquet Street#46, Block L.

Moreover

, the best thing is that you will be residing in my house till your departure period.

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, I am much excited that you will be with us soon. I hope you will be able to come and attend the occasion in a good health. Keep in touch Muhammad Tahir

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6 paragraphs

163 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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