IN THE FUTURE ROBOTS WILL DO MORE AND MORE JOBS INSTEAD OF HUMANS. DOES THIS DEVELOPMENT HAVE MOREADVANTAGES OF DISADVANTAGES?

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Robots

' presence is growing significantly in our society.

That is

the reason why we can see technology becoming a vital part of our lives.

Although

they bring many accessibilities, there can be some bad sides to

this

development, ,

However

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including

robots

on a daily basis could bring us several good benefits.

Firstly

robots

can do several types of

jobs

without effort, they just have to be programmed to do the task correctly without any error.

This

is why, they can give precise work, with a minimum percentage of failure.

For example

, in the services area, one robot waitress can serve food fastly and without any confusion, since they have been instructed to do so; even in long shit hours while, one human being can easily start doing mistakes after hours doing their job.

Furthermore

, companies can save tons of money using

robots

instead

of people, since

robots

do not need to have a monthly income or break times in comparison with humans.

This

could lead the future of businesses

such

as restaurants to give a non-stopping service working 365 days, 24 hours a day without effort.

Therefore

, there are several advantages of having

robots

working in various positions.

This

could lead to an improvement of the service and the saving of money for the companies that offer

this

kind of work.

On the other hand

, there are some disadvantages to

robots

being part of the

jobs

industry. One of these can be the growing competition between the population and

robots

to get

jobs

. If nowadays is hard to get a good position, with

robots

being part of the competence will be harder.

Thus

, humans will deal with more difficulties to get a job.

Nevertheless

this

is not completely bad since humans can improve to get better

jobs

that any robot cannot do.

In addition

, in the

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future there could be fewer interactions between people, and

robots

will replace people, so the subsequent generation could lose the ability to interact with other human beings,

this

can affect our society and change completely the way that we communicate with others. To conclude, Even if there are some disadvantages I personally believe that the advantages of having

robots

in several positions are greater.

Robots

can give more precise work, they do not need to have breaks or a salary and they can perform every single day of the year.

This

development can change the way that our society and might lead to an improvement in the forthcoming.

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IN THE FUTURE ROBOTS WILL DO MORE AND MORE JOBS INSTEAD OF HUMANS. DOES THIS DEVELOPMENT HAVE MOREADVANTAGES OF DISADVANTAGES?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

The number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below

according to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourists in the 1960s and 70s they return home with no experience of local culture. Why do you think this happens? How was tourism different in the past?

As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society ?

Nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their children to succed. what is the reason for parents doing this? is this a positive or negetive development for the children?

Due to the effects of globalization, the culture of some countries are influenced by others. Some people think this is a positive process. Others think this is a threat to cultural identity. Discuss both sides and give your opinion