Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health. However people are walking less nowadays. Why is this happening ? And give possible solutions

These days more

people

are walking less. But scientists

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that walking is

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valuable

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for our health.

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walking process is often discussed but rarely understood. From my point of view,

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every

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repeats the same and nothing changes. The

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problem is

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computer

games

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, television or other technologies.

People

lose their time for

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things.

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, their stay at home and do not breathe fresh air. The solution

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problem is a

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plan for a

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morning you must

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write

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a paper or

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day

planning and try to comply. And on

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should be walking and

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fresh air. Another reason

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win mine sloth. Above all

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start everything

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a single step. Even though it is difficult. You should

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start it as I said earlier from the plan. You

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. In

this

way, you can overcome laziness. Owing to that, you understand the value of walking. To conclude, walking is a useful activity for our mental and physical health. At a time like

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it is

essential

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role to

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this

person

. Indeed, the

person

will be more joyful, and the energy of

this

person

will be pleasant. There are no disadvantages

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walking, and I want to give advice

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all

people

to go outside and just walk for at least 15 minutes.