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Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health. However people are walking less nowadays. Why is this happening ? And give possible solutions

#health #experts #exercise #people
These days more
people
 are walking less. But scientists
rely
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 that walking is
a
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valuable
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 for our health.
This
 walking process is often discussed but rarely understood. From my point of view,
this
 is due to stress at work or school
day
. A
person
 gets tired physically and mentally after a severe
day
. In brief,
and
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every
day
 repeats the same and nothing changes. The
second
 problem is
a
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computer
games
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, television or other technologies.
People
 lose their time for
such
 things.
Consequently
, their stay at home and do not breathe fresh air. The solution
of
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this
second
 problem is a
compile
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 plan for a
day
.
Every
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day
 morning you must
to
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write
for
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a paper or
in
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notes on the phone
your
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day
 planning and try to comply. And on
this
planning
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 should be walking and
breath
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breathing
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 fresh air. Another reason
of
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this
 problem is sloth. All
people
 must
be
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win mine sloth. Above all
to
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start everything
for
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 a single step. Even though it is difficult. You should
to
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start it as I said earlier from the plan. You
first
 set goals and do everything to
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. In
this
 way, you can overcome laziness. Owing to that, you understand the value of walking. To conclude, walking is a useful activity for our mental and physical health. At a time like
this
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 it is
essential
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 role to
success
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this
person
. Indeed, the
person
 will be more joyful, and the energy of
this
person
 will be pleasant. There are no disadvantages
in
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 walking, and I want to give advice
to
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all
people
 to go outside and just walk for at least 15 minutes.
Submitted by Mezun 2023 on

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