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some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides and reach a conclusion

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Nowadays boarding
schools
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 are one of many different options for parents to choose for their
children
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. Some individuals think
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 good for students to study in
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 kinds of
schools
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 while others have a huge conflict
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 not a good way to study. I am going to elaborate on both points of view and in the
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end I will give my own opinions with relevant examples. To start with,
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 is obvious that studying in
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schools
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 has many advantages and benefits for students. To give an example, one of the big advantages of these
schools
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 is the atmosphere,
children
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 will grow up in a scientific environment and
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 fact helps them to learn better and faster than others.
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,
children
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 become more friendly with their teachers and other school staff.
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, every solitary child is sleep eats and studies equally in the same vicinity.
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, some parents tempt to register their
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 in other kinds of
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.
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, some
schools
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 may have expensive fees to pay but the quality might be very low because showing off there is no time to learn and study. To explicate it, some parents just want to put their
children
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 in an expensive school without paying attention to the level of the school's knowledge and teachers it can have its own disadvantages.
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,
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 become more selfish and they squander their time without knowing it. To sum up, if I have a child I would prefer to choose boarding
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 to register. In my opinion,
children
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 should be very concerned about their studies during
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 period of time and
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 why I prefer to choose boarding
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.
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