Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?

There is a tremendously controversial perspective heating up a debate

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investing in

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and highways takes a more crucial role in society than in mass transit. While

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statement is valid to some extent, I would contend that the government should fund both of them equally. Without a shadow of a doubt, spending

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on

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and motorways can bring a wealth of merits, especially deteriorating the traffic congestion. It cannot be denied that in

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fast-paced world, the more population increases, the more gridlock accelerates.

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, when splurging

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on building more

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,

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issue can be alleviated.

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, the Vietnamese government has invested in building more viaducts to solve the traffic jam on Truong Chinh road, which leads to

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happiness.

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,

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invested in

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and highways has a wide range of benefits. While the positive impacts of investing in

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and motorways are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if

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public transportation

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ignored. Contributing to the preservation of the environment is one of the advantages of doing that.

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to automobiles and other private vehicles, some genres of public transport provide

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pollutants to the environment.

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public transport services will lower pollution and enhance air quality.

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, the Swedish government made investments in the construction of the subway system, which decreased the country's reliance on cars and elevated Sweden to one of the nations with the lowest levels of air pollution in the world.

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, the authority should fund the public transportation network. In conclusion, to improve people's lives, funding must be allocated to mass transit, as well as to

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and highways equally.